Sunday, May 17, 2015

Descriptive Writing in Room 9

At writing time the students in Room 9 are enjoying writing descriptions using lots of interesting adjectives.


The descriptions of Mr Willy Wonka are certainly worth a read.  Here are a few to whet your appetite.  Call in to the classroom to check out some of our other clever writers, and talented artists.

Willy Wonka wears a velvet coat and a black hat.  He poses and jumps.  Willy Wonka wears a bowtie.  He is crazy and funny.  Wonka has white hair.  He has blue eyes and rosy cheeks.  I like Willy Wonka because he is funny.
By Casey

Willy Wonka is funny.  I like him because he runs fast and he has a black hat.  He rushes along the corridor.  He is the best chocolate maker and he makes me laugh!
By Rosa

Willy Wonka is silly and has a black hat.  He is wise and runs a lot.  Sometimes he skips but not with a skipping rope.  He is friendly.
By Fin


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